Relationships these days are different, Well at least for some!
So just this thought crossed my mind and here comes an imagination (Which I guess, might be true for many as well 😛 )
Have a look 🙂
I saw her face, was like GOD’s blessing,
couldn’t see more, thanks to her privacy settings..
I don’t generally do it, still added her with a nice message,hoped she’ll like it and open her heart’s passage..
Came her reply, she asked me who,A series of messages then followed through..
Adding and chatting then continued all along,Sometimes just a hi and sometimes dedicating a song..
Her style was different, an attitude decent,
Beautiful she was, like the moon crescent..
We talked a lot, sometimes shared a joke,sometimes a like, at times a post, and the “all the time” poke..!
It was going well, should ask her to meet, or at least the number, i thought,
didn’t really feel the need but it was worth giving a shot..
But One day we fought, couldn’t resolve it all,
thanks to a spam, something bad I had posted on her wall..
I apologised, didn’t poke her all day,
But she put an emotional status which got a 50 likes in its way..
I was clueless, didn’t know what to do,
then came a time when i was drunk, messaged something which i can’t undo..
You have many guy friends, they like all your updates, i had said,
What am i to you, just a “poke buddy”, I guess I was mad..
She was furious, blocked me as a result in pain,
I made many new profiles to see her, but alas! All in vain..
It was one nice phase, that ended just like it was created,
I don’t think I’ll see her again, my profile was DEACTIVATED!
wah wah..wah wah 🙂
Thanku thanku 😀
Simly wow., liked it too much.kya imagination hai and yes might be true for many as well.
thanks a lot, was expecting u to like it 🙂
wow,,,so goood…:D 😀
Thanks a lot 🙂
nw dats what i call d “SHUBHAM EFFECT”………. nice wrk done boss….. really a gud one dis time….. 🙂 🙂
“Shubham effect” 😮 thanks 😀
Nice come back 😛
Hehe.. 😛
Needed that..
awesome 🙂
Thanku 🙂
Acha thha! 😀
Enjoyed it 🙂
Thanks 😀
nAICE!! 😀 d bst prt bout ur writng ….its sooo catchy 😀 🙂 keep it up buddy 😉
and when that comes from a better poet, has to be liked 🙂
enjoyed it till the end…well described n liked the rhyming scheme..:D
thank you.. it was made up in 10 minutes thanks to the rhyming scheme
haha ha ha ha ha ha !! It was so nicely written. Your ending is superb! Keep Posting 😀
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Thanks 🙂
and i visited your blog, have left my comments there, have a look 🙂
Yes Subham, I have seen your comment and i have dropped a mail to your mail id 🙂
Please have a look
Thanks 🙂
Great.. i’ll get back to you 🙂
Unfortunately it might be a true story for some (many actually)!! Well expressed.
Many was the right word.. thanks 🙂
hahaha…good one… 😉
Well.. Thanks 😀
Ha ha.. Funny, sensible and I believe most of us have an experience to relate to many a part of the poem.. Very nice 🙂
Thanku.. glad u liked it 🙂
Just a passing phase…wait for the activation…!
U seem experienced 😛
This is my story except no block or de activate. He just won’t talk to me now…..we were such good friends once….
This period comes in most lifes, and rarely but it does prove fruitful too 🙂
Finally!! 😀
Haha!
Verses could be related to virtual reality.
Thanks.. that’s a fact 😀
haha! interesting one! how true 😛
Glad you liked it 🙂
This one stupendously amazing….
amazing writing, and yes, not to forget the Rhyming. 😉 😛
well done!! *pats back* 😀
Thanku thanku.. glad u liked it 🙂
it’s nice…and cute too…:)))
Thanks, glad u liked it 🙂
Inspiring.. ;P
haha.. thanks 😀
solid hai boss…..
Thank you 🙂
Haha..true story!! 😛 The rhyming was really good.
Thanks a lot. This is soon going to be published in an anthology 🙂