A facebook relationship!

Posted: February 15, 2012 in English, Lifestyle, Love, Popcorn posts
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Relationships these days are different, Well at least for some!
So just this thought crossed my mind and here comes an imagination (Which I guess, might be true for many as well ๐Ÿ˜› )
Have a look ๐Ÿ™‚


I saw her face, was like GOD’s blessing,

couldn’t see more, thanks to her privacy settings..

I don’t generally do it, still added her with a nice message,

hoped she’ll like it and open her heart’s passage..

Came her reply, she asked me who,

A series of messages then followed through..

Adding and chatting then continued all along,

Sometimes just a hi and sometimes dedicating a song..


Her style was different, an attitude decent,

Beautiful she was, like the moon crescent..

We talked a lot, sometimes shared a joke,

sometimes a like, at times a post, and the “all the time” poke..!

ย Relationship@facebookIt was going well, should ask her to meet, or at least the number, i thought,

didn’t really feel the need but it was worth giving a shot..


But One day we fought, couldn’t resolve it all,

thanks to a spam, something bad I had posted on her wall..

I apologised, didn’t poke her all day,

But she put an emotional status which got a 50 likes in its way..

I was clueless, didn’t know what to do,

then came a time when i was drunk, messaged something which i can’t undo..


You have many guy friends, they like all your updates, i had said,

What am i to you, just a “poke buddy”, I guess I was mad..

She was furious, blocked me as a result in pain,

I made many new profiles to see her, but alas! All in vain..


It was one nice phase, that ended just like it was created,

I don’t think I’ll see her again, my profile was DEACTIVATED!

  1. shilpi says:

    wah wah..wah wah ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. smita says:

    Simly wow., liked it too much.kya imagination hai and yes might be true for many as well.

  3. aayushmnit says:

    wow,,,so goood…:D ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. nw dats what i call d “SHUBHAM EFFECT”………. nice wrk done boss….. really a gud one dis time….. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Shubham Khandelwal says:

    Nice come back ๐Ÿ˜›

  6. mitin says:

    awesome ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Acha thha! ๐Ÿ˜€
    Enjoyed it ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. nAICE!! ๐Ÿ˜€ d bst prt bout ur writng ….its sooo catchy ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ™‚ keep it up buddy ๐Ÿ˜‰

  9. GARGI says:

    enjoyed it till the end…well described n liked the rhyming scheme..:D

  10. Saikat says:

    haha ha ha ha ha ha !! It was so nicely written. Your ending is superb! Keep Posting ๐Ÿ˜€
    And if time permits please pay a visit to my blog : http://saikatscribble.blogspot.in/

  11. aativas says:

    Unfortunately it might be a true story for some (many actually)!! Well expressed.

  12. Cynosure says:

    hahaha…good one… ๐Ÿ˜‰

  13. Vinay says:

    Ha ha.. Funny, sensible and I believe most of us have an experience to relate to many a part of the poem.. Very nice ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. sibichen says:

    Just a passing phase…wait for the activation…!

  15. Lisa Beehler says:

    This is my story except no block or de activate. He just won’t talk to me now…..we were such good friends once….

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  17. Prateek says:

    Verses could be related to virtual reality.

  18. AdiSin says:

    haha! interesting one! how true ๐Ÿ˜›

  19. triptigoel says:

    This one stupendously amazing….
    amazing writing, and yes, not to forget the Rhyming. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
    well done!! *pats back* ๐Ÿ˜€

  20. Tamanna says:

    it’s nice…and cute too…:)))

  21. Vineet says:

    Inspiring.. ;P

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  23. Raghav says:

    solid hai boss…..

  24. pseudomonaz says:

    Haha..true story!! ๐Ÿ˜› The rhyming was really good.

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